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“This ‘thing’ that we have, its dark and its twisted…”

And it’s all you’ve ever needed.

"This can only hurt. Over and over again Malfoy. This can only be broken and more decimated then it already is.”

As if that’s even possible. (Drowning in Salted Water~Ch. 53)

Saturday, 16 October 2010

Updates!

Comments on Chapter 65. **spoilers**

So we've come a long way since bully over blood in school with these two, have we not? :) Well I've been working really hard on this and the next couple of chapters. I wanted to get them spot on, and at a flow so there's no stinted pacing. I want the next few chapters to flow.

So in this chapter I really wanted to show Hermione's decent. Into darkness, into madness. We don't know. Surely she was already there? But either way, a lot of questions are about to be answered ^_^.

Special thanks to everyone who emails and comments me, I mean that sincerely. Your opinions are very, very important. Without feedback from you guys, I dunno where I am in the story telling plan. I never know if I'm doing it well, sucking you in, boring you or anything. So thank you to everyone who gets back to me on a regular basis. And to those who only leave one review. Anything is better than nothing, even if it is critical. It helps. Thank you to everyone for taking the time to write. :)

Thank you. ^_^

If any of you know some other great Dramione M rated fiction sites then could you possibly let me know? Granger Enchanted had too many problems with mine. Mostly the change of POV. But if you can let me know, that would be great ^_^ I'm already on Hawthorn and Vine :)

Many thanks guys.

B xxxxx
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  1. Sandra18 October 2010 at 17:32

    The last chapter was absolutley amazing. I actually cheered when Hermione pointed her wand at Voldemort at the end! :D Love it! Im soooo looking forward to the next chapter. This chapter had me at the edge of my seat from the very beginning. The characters have evolved so much.

    If i would point out a couple of things it would only be that Draco mentions the snake thounge on Voldemort two times, if it was supposed to be that way then thats fine :)

    And in certain places the PoV changes are a bit confusing. (I know you change that way in this story, and I'm fine with that, but usually its more than a couple of lines before the change, so it could possibly help the flow :)

    Keep up the great work!
    - Sandra

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  2. Gryffindor Girl28 October 2010 at 02:29

    Hi Sandra!

    I did write a long response to this the other day but duno why it didn't post. I have to make this quick but ty so0o0 much for commenting.

    I've just uploaded two more chapters so I'm quite excited ^_^

    I mentioned the tongue thing twice bcoz, i wanted to mention the phrase Serpent's tongue but I didn't wana write it like that first off. I think i wrote something about looking like a 'snake's tongue' just so it wasn't too cheesey or cliche, i hope. :S I dunno if it reads ok or not :(

    POV is confusing here and I understand that. I wanted to the two POV's to merge though. As though they're almost becoming one being. So you don't know who it is thinking what at some points. So although its confusing it was kinda meant to be. I only hope it's not tooo confusing. ^_^

    Thank you so much as usual Sandra! ^_^
    B xxx

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